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If only I could make you see
That all the things you mean to me
Could never be explained
With the words that I can say

Nor the music that I write,
Could ever full suffice,
The way my heart beats softly to the
Sounding of your drum

You deserved only the best
And what you got was me, and
All the things I say and do
That didn't make any sense to you

And yet you tolerated me!
If only I could make you see
That you deserved the best
And all I gave was all of me

How I wish that you would see
That no one else had captured me,
That the words I said are yours alone
That I wrote this song for you

And my heart burns within me
At the mention of your name
When all it was, was someone
Playing a silly little game

And my hurt, it burns within me (sic)
When I think of all the games we played
Saying words that held no names
Hoping things would never change

It makes me sad when you are sad
Wish I could give you all I had
But if I offer more than song, then
You'd think I treated you all wrong...

And I'm too afraid to let you know
How much I really love you so
And that my loss of self direction
Was just my immature affection

And yet I'm too afraid to say,
'cause I know that you don't feel this way...
So while the blue still turns to gray,
I have to let love fly away.
:iconsplinter-cell37:

Author's Comments

But I'm too afraid, you see
To watch my history repeat
But this time upside down
Instead of smiles, we'll see frowns.

*sigh*

An attempt at lyrical poetry.

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:iconintricacy-muser:
Simply - beautiful.

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And then the silence began.
:iconsplinter-cell37:
Thank you

--
[Christian]

Action always generates inspiration. Inspiration seldom generates action.
- Frank Tibolt
:iconintricacy-muser:
you're welcome.

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And then the silence began.
:iconfenrisian-wolf:
A pretty good atempt i'd say.

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An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbared and unguarded.
:iconpuka-garu:
Nice~
Great work, mate (:
:iconsplinter-cell37:
Thanks!

--
[Christian]

Action always generates inspiration. Inspiration seldom generates action.
- Frank Tibolt
:iconcosmovsgoku:
Very nice work =)

--
SonicX the Abridged Series; [link]

"Keep your dreams alive" - Vic Mignogna (And Sean Schemmel agrees)

~cosmovsgoku loves ~Toshyii
~Toshyii loves ~cosmovsgoku
:iconfenrisian-wolf:
NP m8 :)

--
An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbared and unguarded.
:icongothpoetess:
Amazing work. I really like it. :D

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Ona vuče moje niti, ona čini moje sne...

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